For Emerging Writers: How to Outwit Your Inner Editor in Time to Enter the Kootenay Literary Competition
Hello, and welcome to our blog! Promotion for the Kootenay Literary Competition has picked up steam, there’s been an upswing in inquiries about the competition at our email address (kootenaylitcomp@gmail.com) and now In The Koots has generously helped the Competition get its very own blog. I’m so excited!
This first post is directed at all the emerging writers out there who are telling themselves “the entry deadline is only a month away, there isn’t enough time to write something for the competition.” The maximum word count for an entry is only 5,000 words. It is do-able, I promise! And one emerging writer to another, I’ll even give you some hints on how you might be able to pull off a first draft in the next seven days.
I’m currently up to my neck in Nanowrimo (National Novel Writing Month) which means I’m writing a minimum of 1,667 words a day, every day, for the entire month of November. And this year I’m using a sure-fire method to help reach that daily goal. And no, it doesn’t involve abusing the triple-strong espresso setting on my coffee maker, having my main character recite the dictionary or begging writing buddies to agree that Facebook status updates count towards my daily word goal.
What it does involve is Word Wars. Word Wars could get you a first draft of your Kootenay Literary Competition short story in a week. All you need to successfully participate in a Word War is a timer and your own permission to write some truly terrible stuff.
The object of this word battle is to write without stopping, without overthinking, without editing. You do this by forcing yourself to get as many words written as possible within a set time period. So fetch the egg timer out of the kitchen, log onto some free online site like http://www.online-stopwatch.com/ or grab your cell phone and set the alarm. Set the thing for 15 minutes from now. Then start writing. Don’t think. Just write. Type away. Get the pen moving. Can’t think of a name for your character? Call her Jane. Can’t figure out Jane’s facial expression when her stockbroker boyfriend announces he’s moving them both to rural Saskatchewan to pursue his dream of iguana farming? Just say she frowned. Doesn’t matter if she frowns eighteen times in a row. Don’t pause to think up something better. Just say she frowned. Again and again. Keep writing until the timer goes off.
Whew! Okay. Take one minute to make sure the kids are okay and the house isn’t on fire. Then set the timer for another fifteen minutes. And go again.
When I engage in Word Wars, I can end up with five hundred words per timed session. Do two sessions every day for five days and you could have the first draft of your competition entry within a week!
Before you scoff, I assure you this crazed approach to writing a first draft works. It took me three years to let go of my hang-ups and prejudices and embrace the idea, and I’d trade all my hardcover Diana Gabaldons to get those years back. This is what the pros are talking about when they say “turn off your inner editor.” You outwit your inner editor by outrunning her. For me, this approach is the difference between writing a plot-advancing scene and floundering around for three hours, rewriting things in my head ten times before finally committing them to paper…and still ending up with something fractured and unusable.
Now, I’m not saying that at the end of those timed sessions I’ve written something great. In fact, I can guarantee it’s gloriously awful. Characters wind up with the same names as cartoon fish. Setting description is limited to phrases like “smelly room.” But the scene is complete, from start to finish. I know how many warm bodies are in that room, the basics of what the characters need to say and I have a decent idea of what each character is (or isn’t) going to get from one another before all they flee for fresher scented environments. Which means I can move on to the next scene, then the next, and the next…until I finish the story and have a complete first draft.
A novelist I admire once said “I can revise a bad first draft, but I can’t revise a blank page.” Truer words were never spoken. I urge you to be brave enough to write first, fix later. Crank out that first draft, scene by scene, from start to finish. There’ll be time later to go back over it and give Jane a better name, more facial expressions and clearer motivation for finally dumping her iguana-loving boyfriend (if that whole lizard thing isn’t enough…shudder). But you can’t fix what isn’t there.
If you want to enter the Kootenay Literary Competition but think there isn’t time, I beg to differ. A first draft could be a week away. It just involves you, a timer and a willingness to go to war with your inner editor. Don’t worry, you and she can get together for peace talks next week. After you’ve finished your first draft.
Happy writing!
Deb O’Keeffe, Kootenay Literary Competition Committee
Questions? Contact: kootenaylitcomp@gmail. The Kootenay Literary Competition is organized and run by volunteers. The KLC gratefully acknowledges our sponsor Nelson and District Arts Council and thanks In The Koots for their wonderful support and assistance.
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